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10/10
Can't wait for epissode 2

Hah!

Awesome!
That's some very good type right there, although perhaps slightly too swift changes of words/view at some points - but then again, the voice is quite clear, and so legibility is not as important as it would've been with a more mumbling sort of voice.

Good job!

Aweso!

The collab turned out great!
There were a decent amount of artists involved, and a high quality standard.
I must say, great job to all artists and excellent job to the organizers!

This flash is just downright sexy!

J-qb responds:

Thanks, we couldnt havedone it without your art, music and hel.p with the code

Erhmm ..

Well first I'd like to say you can upload your flash in the newgrounds dumping grounds (newgrounds.com/dump), it cannot be blammed from there, plus you've got more file space to upload.

Also to make a flash stop at the last frame, open the actionscripts panel and type "stop();"
without the quotes of course.

The animation itself is a bit ... meh ...
I recommend moving away from animating stickmen because you aren't learning much using them. That, plus stickmen doesn't have the same aesthetic effect as humans or animals does.

The song

What is the name of the first song in this flash (Or the second song, if you count the intro). I think I've heard it before, do you perhaps know where? Name of the song or where I've heard it would be greatly appreciated! It's stuck on my brain.

Other than that I'd like to say it's a great short! Deserves all attention it can get!
the only thing is perhaps the voices being slightly loud and the lines being a bit sloppy here and there.

Other than that, great job!

Its good

... but the thing that is dragging it down is all the empty spaces between dialogue. Real life conversations dont take that long to reply.

Remove all those empty spaces and speed it up and you're good to go!

(another thing you can do if you find it absolutely impossible to remove empty spaces is to add some background music)

MrKidNinja responds:

yeah i was contemplating more background music .
Ill probably do alot more for the next one.

Happy birthday, JKA!

Collab turned out aweso!
Happy birthday Mr. Anderson!

congrats

Congrats on fp man! You deserved it, good job!

YouriX responds:

Thanks man! :D I am sooo psyced!!

Woah!

Good job my fellow citizens!
Although it should say "Edvard Grieg" instead of just Grieg to be abit picky!

And also, why the crappy jpeg res?

try this:

Use ONE VOICE PER CHARACTER!

Also, please make the switching between the "O" mousth and the "_" mouth smoother.

Giantsockmonster responds:

I tried my best, its pretty hard to get it on EXACTLY the same frame

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