Havegum's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[NG Audio Bridge]

Sweet

Bookmarked.
Very well executed. I like it a lot!

I'm missing a filter between song and loop though, and perhaps a loop function with set how many times one wishes to loop the playing song.

Also, it's a bit hard to read the author and song name. Perhaps add a white border around the text?

gumOnShoe responds:

I'll look into it. Also, like your name. :)

[Paradise Invaders]

eeeeh

Was abit simple and easy.

You could have added breaks between the levels where the player is allowed to upgrade stuff (size, speed, health, minimize time, minimize reload time) and you could have done it so that the enemies and the character was smaller.

All in all its a very simple game. not too fun really. kept me entertained for about one minute, if that much. I got to lvl 10 on 2nd try.

Spend some time practicing, I'm sure the flash forum will be glad to help you. Also next time, get an animator to do the animating work.

Hope that helped, have a nice day!

chrisp0 responds:

Haha, then you are a God.
I will get an animator next time!
Thank you!

[Gravitex 2]

ownd

start hero,3,508 finish,693,14 grav,277,120,1;467,237,1;336,70,1;648 ,211,2.2;394,29,1;601,268,1 repel,20,349,1;243,465,1;291,405,1;75 ,281,1;119,228,1;169,204,1;357,348,1;
411,299,1;214,171,1;600,237,1 block, coin, end

kchamp responds:

Haha, nice one! Maybe add some coins?