Havegum's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monochrome Art Collab]

Aweso!

The collab turned out great!
There were a decent amount of artists involved, and a high quality standard.
I must say, great job to all artists and excellent job to the organizers!

This flash is just downright sexy!

J-qb responds:

Thanks, we couldnt havedone it without your art, music and hel.p with the code

[The Losers list]

Its good

... but the thing that is dragging it down is all the empty spaces between dialogue. Real life conversations dont take that long to reply.

Remove all those empty spaces and speed it up and you're good to go!

(another thing you can do if you find it absolutely impossible to remove empty spaces is to add some background music)

MrKidNinja responds:

yeah i was contemplating more background music .
Ill probably do alot more for the next one.

[Color This World]

congrats

Congrats on fp man! You deserved it, good job!

YouriX responds:

Thanks man! :D I am sooo psyced!!

[la la la]

try this:

Use ONE VOICE PER CHARACTER!

Also, please make the switching between the "O" mousth and the "_" mouth smoother.

Giantsockmonster responds:

I tried my best, its pretty hard to get it on EXACTLY the same frame

[A* Episode 4]

Why?

Why is this not at the front page?
You are obviously a talented artist. You migth consider using colors
(i know the black-white thingy runs through the series). Also the shading is not perfect, but what is?

smbhax responds:

I probably won't be going full-color on this series... I suppose I could throw color in some time to surprise people, though!

[Paper flow]

Press start

Press start for the bonus clip!

Zyphonee responds:

Press select for the free beer!

[music video gone wrong]

Okaayyy??

Okay.. im gonna be honest... i didn't really like it...

First of all - it was just a bunch of shapes that was moving around with some random music playing in the background
Second - The music was repeating itself after the music vid was finished
Third - It didn't have any characters nor a plot
Lastly - I am sure that you can make it better.

- Havegum

rasfire responds:

yeah but that is way the name of it is what it is

[Hans Jellyfish]

<insert original title here>

This is frontpage-stuff... i hope you get an arward for this one!
but how did he survive without water?

professor-fate responds:

Good question. Unfortunately, I don't have the answer.
This animation was never, ever supposed to make sense. :P

[Sonic RPG Nightmare eps1]

wtf?

I dont know about this.
I cant watch it. it just keeps skipping from one frame (tails in lab) to the next (sprites) and then loops the same sequense again...
2 bad. i really wanted to see this

RubySparkle14 responds:

I'm sorry I did try REALLY hard on this