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[Kawaii Cupcake]

:)GC

Love it! <3

[Relax -Red]

Eeh

I can't really tell what's going on.
Try defining important edges a bit more and keep details more subtle

[Afro Deity]

Silky smooth

As always, great job! I think her right hand looks a little awkward though, and a background would be nice :P

Brakkenimation responds:

Thanks for your review.

I'll keep your points in mind for future artwork :)

[El verde]

Well

The lines are all wobbly, and it needs a background, otherwise it looks pretty sketchy still, try cleaning the lines up a bit more!

fatcat360 responds:

Yeah, I should clean it up. I just kinda rushed it, So i'll work on it some more. I'll also put in a background. Thanks for the review!

[The hill]

Try a harder subject

Madness characters drawn that way isn't too hard or challenging to draw. Try drawing more complicated subjects.

Deathisawesome responds:

It wasn't that easy you know :/ Still, I understand what you mean, and I'll try to add more stuff the next time :)

[Penguin]

Funny

but it could use a background, if even only a single line to mark the horizon.

[Motivational Ryu]

More details please

I think it lacks some details on certain body parts, specifically his hands, head and feet.
You could use the brown colour from his belt.
Otherwise great! I'd wear a T-shirt like that

maniac086 responds:

Thanks!
Actually, considering using this against a brown shirt, I think letting the brown of the shirt show through to add accent lines to his skin might work! (The dark brown might be too dark, I think.)
I'll definitely consider tweaking that at some point!